Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Beyond Atlantis my current WIP


What is the working title of your book?

 Beyond Atlantis

 Where did the idea come from for the book?

 I read a lot of science Fiction and paranormal so I would say it was inspired by what I read.

 What genre does your book fall under?

 Science fiction, erotic, romance 

 Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie?






What is a one sentence synopsis of your book?

 The survival and struggles of the human race after an Alien invasion.

 Will your book be self published or represented by an agency/publisher?

 Publisher 

 How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?

 A month 

 What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

 The Poseleen series by John Ringo

 Who or What inspired you to write this book?

 I watch movies and read books those are what inspire me.

 What else about your book might interest the reader?

 If you like action, a colorful collection of characters and sizzling romance this is a book for you.

 Here is the link back to Kim Carmichael's  post
 
http://kimcarmichaelnovels.com/2012/12/02/next-big-thing-blog-hop/

Monday, December 3, 2012

Book Trailer for A Witch and Her Man

Book trailer

My book cover A Witch and Her Man

A Witch and Her Man
Gail is a very frightened lady. She is getting death threats over the phone and someone has been in her house while she was at work. In desperation she employs Jeff, a PI-bodyguard, for protection and to find the one or ones responsible. During the course of their first face-to-face meeting Gail informs him she is a witch. He makes light of her revelation but soon discovers she is serious in her claim. Buy link------ A Witch and Her Man

A Witch and Her Man

My new book A Witch and Her Man Excerpt:------- Gail slid gracefully from the couch and disappeared down the hall. When she returned, she had a blanket and pillow in her hands. She handed them to him. Gail yawned and stretched. "Goodnight, Jeff. See you in the morning." Padding softly across the floor, Gail went into her bedroom and closed the door behind her. Jeff fluffed the pillow and pulled the blanket over him. He lay in the dark thinking of what she had told him. He was just dozing off when a rattle of the front door lock brought him to alert. In a flash, he was wide-awake and rolled to the floor, drawing his gun from its holster on the coffee table. The door opened and two men stood silhouetted in the doorway. "Stop right there," he ordered, not knowing who the newcomers were and not wanting to accidentally hurt one of Gail's friends. He could not think of a friend who would come over in the middle of the night unannounced and let themselves in, but the remote possibility did exist. His indecision was answered seconds later when the man in front drew his weapon and fired. Jeff heard two bullets hit the couch with a thunk where he had been asleep moments before. An instant before he fired back, the man dropped to a crouch and the round missed. The man's partner was not as lucky. The round meant for the lead man struck his chest. "Oomph," the man grunted in surprise as the round punched him back and sent him tumbling off the steps. Just then, Gail's bedroom door opened. In a voice thick with sleep, she asked, "What was that noise..." Jeff scrambled to his feet and dashed across the intervening space. He tackled Gail to the floor and covered her body with his own just as two more bullets splintered the bedroom door above. "Shhh, keep quiet and stay down," Jeff ordered in a low, terse voice There was a commotion at the front door and the assailant vanished. "Stay here and keep low," Jeff growled again at the terrified and now fully awake Gail. He crawled across the floor, grabbed an extra magazine and peeked outside just in time to see two men scrambling into a car. One of the men was holding his chest and staggering. For just a moment, the streetlight illuminated them and Jeff saw both were wearing police uniforms. At first glance, the car appeared to be a police cruiser but to his educated eye it was not. It was the wrong make and model. Both men scrambled into the auto and it sped away, tires squealing. Jeff surged to his feet and began to shoot at the receding car. The loud reports of his gun shattered the early morning stillness. Jeff's lips tightened in satisfaction when he saw the back window of the fleeing car explode into tiny pieces. Bullets continued to pepper the car as he emptied his entire twelve round clip into it. The car rounded the corner and was lost to view. Without even thinking, Jeff ejected the spent magazine, slid in a fresh one and chambered a round.

Tess Book trailer

My book trailer for Tess

My new book

My new book - Tess available at Amazon.com -
Book blurb. It’s been a really bad night. First Tess is sexually harassed by her lecherous boss and then she finds that during her shift as a cocktail server it has snowed. Trudging through the cold she is attacked by a mugger and knifed. She wakes to find that she is in a strange bed, with no clothes on and wearing a collar that is chained to a wall. A stranger sits across the room gazing at her. Things can’t get worse. Can they? They can. Tess soon finds there really are things that go bump in the night and Alonzo is one of those things. Available at - Amazon.com

Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Geo in Disguise contest


Contest.
Starting Thursday 8/16/12 and running until Thursday 8/23/12 I will have a contest. At the close I will draw a name and present the winner with a gift certificate for $6 from Amazon. This certificate can be used for or toward any purchase on the site.
The contest rules are simple, read the excerpt below and answer the question What is Geo's actual first name? (Hint: She tells Ryan her name twice) Enter your answer in the form of a comment at the end of this blog posting or on my facebook page posting for the contest at http://www.facebook.com/gary.stillman

That's all. Thank you and best of luck
Gary

Excerpt Geo In Disguise

He shivered slightly. The light coat he wore was not heavy enough for the mountains though there was no snow on the ground. The late afternoon sun was sinking fast. Soon it would be dark and the temperature would drop even more. “So what do you do now Ryan? It would be impossible to pretend to just bump into her out here.” That’s what he’d intended to do if she lived in town in an apartment. He was going to pretend he was looking for a friend and just happened to see her.
That certainly wouldn’t work out here. Several times, he turned to head back to his car only to turn once more and study the clearing with the small cabin in the center. Since he’d been here, he’d seen no activity outside or inside through the open curtains. He was certain this had to have been her destination though because it was the only place the road led. There was a two-car garage so her car was doubtless inside.
Still debating his next move, he stood in the darkness, hidden behind a tree and observed the cabin. As darkness had fallen, no lights had come on. Not even the chirping of birds or the noise of insects disturbed the absolute silence that had descended on the area.
Surprise jolted through him when a soft, melodious voice asked, “Are you spying on me, Ryan? What do you want? Why are you following me Ryan?”
“I… Um…” He started to turn but her words stopped him.
“No Ryan just stay as you are until you answer some of my questions.”
“You know my name but I don’t know yours. Who are you?”
“Who do you think I am?”
“The woman from my microbiology class but I don’t know your name.”
“I could be her. So, I’ll ask again. Why are you following me? Maybe I should call the cops and tell them you’re stalking me.”
“I don’t have a good answer to why I’m following you. Just that I want to get to know that woman better. Honest, I don’t mean any harm.”
“That’s good because I’ll tell you right now I can defend myself very well. So what should I do about you?”
“Well, you could tell me your name. Maybe invite me in for a beer or something.”
She chuckled. “Yeah… I guess I could do that. Should I?”
“Well, from my standpoint, I’d rather you do that than call the cops. If you’re the woman from school, I’d like to know you better. I’ve tried to meet you at school but you always seem to disappear before I can talk to you.”
 “I’m a private person. Why do you wish to know me, Ryan?”
“I can’t explain it really. I seem to be drawn to you. I find you attractive. Pretty.”
This time she laughed louder. “You don’t have good answers and you can’t explain. You aren’t doing very well answering my questions. Then you tell me that you find me pretty even with the clothes I wear and those glasses?”
“Well…Yes.”
This time when she spoke, her voice sounded like it was right behind him. If fact, he could feel her breath tickle the back of his neck. How the hell can she move so quietly?
“Okay, Ryan. You’ve convinced me. Go to my front door. It’s unlocked. I’ll be right behind you. No tricks. I have a gun.”
He stepped into the darkened room, which became brightly illuminated when she flipped a switch behind him.
“I don’t have beer. Will tea be okay?”
“That’s fine.”
“Then take a seat on the couch. I’ll be right back.”
Still blinking in the brightness, he turned to look at her but she was already gone into the… he guessed kitchen. Damn she’s fast and silent. While he waited, he looked around the room. An arrangement of colorful flowers sat in a vase on the dark wood coffee table in front of him. Across the room was a stone fireplace. On each side of the off-white couch were matching overstuffed chairs. Scenic pictures of nature hung on all four walls. In addition to the kitchen door behind him, two more lead from the room along with an open doorway. The wood floor shined and the rest of the room was meticulous. He didn’t even know she’d returned until she spoke from right beside him.
“Here’s your tea.”
He jerked his head sideways to face her and his breath caught in his throat.
“Georgiana.”
“Excuse me?”
“My name is Georgiana. Although most of my… friends call me Geo.”

Saturday, July 21, 2012


Part of the Teelan series
Terror has a new name
(unedited)
Naa’dia stood in the shadows in a wooded area watching through binoculars. Three days driving and two stolen cars brought her to this location just outside of Williamsport, Pennsylvania. People filed out of the large factory that covered several acres. It was late afternoon and shift change. Her research showed the factory produced Glouton, a paste like substance. When a small amount of Glouton was combined with other foods it multiplied their nutritional value by a factor of a hundred. A single loaf of bread could feed two-hundred people. Glouton was shipped all over the world and fed millions of people.
Naa’dia recalled her investigation. A small portion of the product was unaccounted for. Naa’dia couldn’t follow the trail of that portion online but she suspected it went to the mysterious Teelan.
Naa’dia fixed her attention on an individual wearing a business suit that walked of the security gate and got into a red sport car. That is my immediate target. Glenn is the head of security and will doubtless be able to provide much information. She dashed to her own car and was waiting near the exit gate when he left the facility. She followed him at a discrete distance.
After an hours drive, Glenn pulled into the garage of a nice frame house located in a suburb. Naa’dia drove past the house, parked on the corner and waited for darkness to fall while watching to make certain Glenn didn’t leave. When she judged it was dark enough, Naa’dia moved further away. Before leaving the car she pulled down her pants and removed the small ray-pistol hidden beneath the skin of her right butt cheek. Naa’dia locked the car up and returned to the residence on foot. She scaled the wall of the backyard, avoiding the swimming pool and went to the sliding glass door.
Thumbing the pistol ray to low intensity she melted the door lock. Sliding it open she crept inside. The first room she entered was a kitchen. A woman, Naa’dia was certain she was Glenn’s wife stood by the stove cooking. The woman turned at the slight sound Naa’dia made on the tiled floor.
“Who–– She started.
Woman is a threat to mission success and not needed, Naa’dia’s thoughts told her. Thumbing the pistol up to the high setting and in a lightning fast motion she fired at near point blank range. The ray burned into the woman’s head between her question filled eyes. She tumbled to the floor without another peep.
Naa’dia ears perked when she heard from another room.
“Honey did you start to say something? And what was that noise?” The male voice was getting closer. Naa’dia raced across the room and pressed to the wall beside an arched entrance. Glenn walked through and his attention went to his wife crumpled on the floor. Naa’dia struck. A single blow to the head, which she held back on at the last second, rendered Glenn unconscious.
Naa’dia rushed through the house searching each room. Evidently their teenage daughter was not home. Rummaging through the kitchen drawers yielded a roll of duct tape. She tossed Glenn into one of the swivel dining table chairs, taped his hand behind him and then taped him to the chair. A glass of cold water poured over his head revived him.
“Who the hell are you? What the hell do you want?”
“Not important for you to know,” she answered.
She followed his gaze as he looked once again at his wife. “What did you––
“She’s dead. We don’t have much time.” Stepping forward, Naa’dia jammed a dishcloth in Glenn’s mouth.
Unzipping her pack she removed a band with wires attached. She stretched it in place around Glenn’s head. The mind probe the woman on her home planet had been subjected to was gentle in comparison to this one. Naa’dia put a similar one on her own head. Reaching into her pack she removed a control unit. She took a seat at one of the other chairs and adjusted the controls. Glenn shuddered and his eyes rolled to the top of his head as thoughts and memories were ripped from his mind. The smell of burned flesh drifted into the air and smoke curled from his head.  
Naa’dia.s eyes became unfocused. The information stored in Glenn’s mind began to flood into hers. Thirty minutes passed and then the process was complete. She removed her headband placing it and the controller back in her pack. Next she removed Glenn’s. There was an inch wide strip of burned flesh surrounding Glenn’s head where the band had been. His eyes started out vacantly. She knew the mind probe was aggressive. When finished the subject was left with barely enough mental capacity to move. He would never be able walk, speak or even feed himself again. In an act of mercy, something she had never felt before, Naa’dia shot him in the heart.
Naa’dia removed his wallet from his back pocket and searched through the contents until she found the item his thoughts told her was important. She slipped in into her fannypack, retraced her steps back to her car and drove to her motel room.

Chapter 4
Naa’dia glanced out the curtain of her seedy motel room for a moment then glanced at her wristwatch. Streetlights dimly lit the area and there was no one about. Crossing the room, she opened her bag removing a small cube shaped object that fit in the palm of her hand. The area inside the clear cube was filled with a powdery substance. One side of the cube had a empty hole in the center. Naa’dia removed two more pieces from her bag. The clear vial filled with liquid was just the right size to fit in the hollowed out part of the cube. The other piece was a combination electrical source and transmitter. She put the three items in her pocket careful to put the cube and vial in separate pockets.
 Naa’dia parked her car and stole through the trees. After a moment’s hesitation and looking in both directions to make certain no one was watching, she raced forward. Flexing her enhanced leg muscles an the last second she leapt into the air. Her bound easily carried her over the eight-foot chain-link fence that surrounded the facility.
Landing in a crouch, Naa’dia dashed to the side of the building and waited to see if her actions had tripped any alarms. After she remained motionless and silent for some time and allowed her breathing to calm, no activity occurred. She slipped along the wall until she came to a side door located where Glenn’s shared knowledge said it would be.
Unzipping her jumpsuit slightly, Naa’dia reached in and removed Glenn’s plastic key card from under her left bra cup. She slid the card through the reader slot beside the door. The door lock mechanism clicked. When she pulled on the handle the metal door swung open.
Beautiful. She grinned.
Naa’dia darted down the long hallway ducking into dark corners to avoid any occupants she saw. Since it was the night shift, her encounters were few. She entered a room near the center of the complex that housed huge power generators. She planted her bomb under one of them.
She sneaked out along the same route and jumped the fence again. Standing behind a tree she waited. Dawn brightened the horizon. She looked at the hands of her watch and waited longer. She watched the seven am shift change. By her count two-hundred people entered the guarded gate for the day shift. By seven-thirty the change was complete. At eight she removed the controller from her pocket.
Naa’dia took one final look at the complex nearly half a kilometer away and pressed a button on the controller. In her mind she saw the reaction. Her transmission triggered a small electrical charge. The material composing the vial evaporated exposing the liquid to the powder. She put the binoculars to her eyes and panned the building while she counted quietly and calmly. “One…two…three…four...five.” 
On the count of five she saw a flash of fire erupt from the center of the structure to reach high in the sky. Seconds later she heard a loud roar followed by a deep rumble. The entire structure covering almost four acres disappeared within a cloud of dirt and dust. Casually she stepped behind the large tree trunk next to her. The ground bucked and rippled under her feet almost making her fall. Rocks and bits of concrete pelted the other side of the tree
When the cloud settled the factory was gone. The only thing remaining was rubble and twisted steel in a deep crater. An eerie silence descended on the area. 
Well that should get their attention. Our research and development techs will be happy to hear their bombs are a great success. Her thought drifted briefly to the dozen more she had in her bag.  
Minutes later the distant wail of emergency vehicle sirens disturbed the quiet. A humorless smile split her lips. There may be survivors down there, but not many. Naa’dia got into her car and drove away, already planning on the annihilation of her next target.
First priority, get a new vehicle, then it is on to the factory near Austin, Texas.
She drove away, tuning in a radio station. She had learned to enjoy rock, especially what the humans called oldies. A smile stretched across her lips and she turned up the volume. The singer’s raspy words blared out of the speakers filling the cars interior. “But you tell me, over and over and over again my friend, ah you don’t believe we’re on the eve of destruction.”
The obliteration of the factory near Austin was just a through and even deadlier. It leveled many of the houses in a nearby development inflicting a greater number of causalities. 

Comments welcome 

Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Geo in Disguise Book Trailer

 What makes Geo attract Ryan like a magnet? It certainly isn’t her appearance or her reserved demeanor. He doesn’t even know her name. He just knows he has a desire, no, a need, to know her better. His dorm-mate, Jim, at the university calls her the mystery girl. Jim even expresses doubts that she even exists. Her quiet, loner attitude and ultra conservative fashion hasn’t driven Ryan away like it does others. It seems instead to interest him more. Geo has a reason to avoid attention. She has a dark secret to hide. She has tried to avoid Ryan but her efforts have failed. There is an unknown influence drawing them together that neither can resist. A force from Geo's past.


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Geo in Disguise


Geo in Disguise on sale now at Wicked Ink Press

Excerpt


He shivered slightly. The light coat he wore was not heavy enough for the mountains though there was no snow on the ground. The late afternoon sun was sinking fast. Soon it would be dark and the temperature would drop even more. “So what do you do now Ryan? It would be impossible to pretend to just bump into her out here.” That’s what he’d intended to do if she lived in town in an apartment. He was going to pretend he was looking for a friend and just happened to see her.
That certainly wouldn’t work out here. Several times, he turned to head back to his car only to turn once more and study the clearing with the small cabin in the center. Since he’d been here he’d seen no activity outside or inside through the open curtains. He was certain this had to have been her destination though because it was the only place the road led. There was a two-car garage so her car was doubtless inside.
Still debating his next move, he stood in the darkness hidden behind a tree and observed the cabin. As darkness had fallen, no lights had come on. Not even the chirping of birds or the noise of insects disturbed the absolute silence that had descended on the area. Surprise jolted through him when a soft melodious female voice asked.
“Are you spying on me, Ryan? What do you want? Why are you following me Ryan?”
“I…Um…” He started to turn but her words stopped him.
“No Ryan just stay as you are until you answer some of my questions.”
“You know my name but I don’t know yours. Who are you?”
“Who do you think I am?”
“The woman from my microbiology class but I don’t know your name.”
“I could be her. So, I’ll ask again. Why are you following me? Maybe I should call the cops and tell them you’re stalking me.”
“I don’t have a good answer to why I’m following you. Just that I want to get to know that woman better. Honest I don’t mean any harm.”
“That’s good because I’ll tell you right now I can…defend myself very well. So what should I do about you?”
“Well you could tell me your name. Maybe invite me in for a beer or something.”
She chuckled. “Yeah… I guess I could do that. Should I?”
“Well from my standpoint I’d rather you do that than call the cops. If you’re the woman from school, I’d like to know you better. I’ve tried to meet you at school but you always seem to disappear before I can talk to you.”
 “I’m a private person. Why do you wish to know me Ryan?”
“I can’t explain it really. I seem to be drawn to you. I find you attractive. Pretty.”
This time she laughed louder. “You don’t have good answers and you can’t explain. You aren’t doing very well answering my questions. Then you tell me that you find me pretty even with the clothes I wear and those glasses?”
“Well…Yes.”
This time when she spoke her voice sounded like it was right behind him. If fact he could feel her breath tickle the back of his neck. How the hell can she move so quiet?
“Okay Ryan. You’ve convinced me. Go to my front door. It’s unlocked. I’ll be right behind you. No tricks. I have a gun.”
He stepped into the darkened room, which became brightly illuminated when she flipped a switch behind him.
“I don’t have beer. Will tea be okay?”
“That’s fine.”
“Then take a seat on the couch. I’ll be right back.”
Still blinking in the brightness, he turned to look at her but she was already gone into the…he guessed kitchen. Damn she moves fast and silent. While he waited he looked at the room. The dark wood coffee table in front of him had an arrangement of flowers in a vase. Across the room in front of him was a stone fireplace. On each side of the couch were large overstuffed chairs an off white in color matching the couch. Nature scene pictures hung on all four walls. In addition to the door to the kitchen behind him two more lead from the room along with an open doorway. The wood floor shined and the rest of the room was meticulously clean and neat. He didn’t even know she’d returned until she spoke from right beside him.
“Here’s your tea.”
He jerked his head to the side to face her and his breath caught in his throat.
“Georgiana.”
“Excuse me?” he asked.
“My name is Georgiana. Although most of my…friends call me Geo,” she repeated.

Thanks for reading G.E. Stills

Friday, May 4, 2012

Character types and creation my ramblings


Character types and creation
Characters come to some of my friends in dreams. They come fully developed with a mind and personality already there. Some even have a voice they use to tell the author about themselves. (must be nice.) Mine don’t.
I usually can’t even remember my dreams. I get my characters from watching the people around me or I think about the people I know. I get ideas from stories I read. I form a picture in my mind of what the character will look like and what traits they will have. Many of my character actions are inspired by the music I’m listening to at the time. This is especially true in an action scene. I like intense action scenes especially in my SciFi stories.
I make a character folder for the story and fill it in as the character develops in my mind. Most of my characters are between twenty and thirty years old. That’s just my preference.
In most of my stories I have a female character that is unafraid to state her needs and desires. She often has a brazen, care less what others think attitude. She is usually outspoken and tough as nails. I also try to include a sense of humor in her. Many of them have suffered emotional hurt in the past. One of my author friends says I write strong female characters. Thank you Diane. I enjoy doing just that. I guess you could say that is part of my style.
Most of my male characters are the strong but silent type. They fall completely in love with their female companion.What can I say to that other than I like romance. Some of them are the take charge types but most of them are followers. I try to instill a sense of humor in them also. Again many of them have suffered emotionally in the past. I’m certain I need to work harder on developing my male characters. The only defense I have is that I enjoy creating strong female characters.  
I try to make my villains despicable and garner strong dislike for them. A friend of mine D is a master at that. I really hate one of the characters in her latest story. lol Almost all of my stories are romance and have a HEA ending.
How do you create your characters and what traits do they display? What type of characters do you like best?    

Sunday, March 11, 2012

Sunday, March 4, 2012

The Witch and the Squirrels



My newest book The Witch and the Squirrels is avaliable now at


Gypsy Shadow publishing and many fine retailers.


Excerpt


“See you in a few days,” he told his relief and then left the firehouse. When he walked out of the building, he glanced up at the ominous-looking clouds.
Wow, that storm is coming in fast.
Just a short time earlier, the sky had been clear. His pace quickened.
Good thing I don’t live far away.
His thoughts moved to the fire earlier. Luckily, they had been able to contain it. Even though the building and the business inside were a total loss, there’d been no deaths and only one fireman slightly injured.
Lost in thought, he didn’t even notice the house until a flash of lightning lit the entire structure. His feet left the sidewalk seconds later at the horrendous crash of thunder. Another flash. This time, he saw it strike the lightning rod on top of the house. The entire structure stood out in the sudden brilliance. The thunderous roar didn’t take him by surprise this time. Even so, it almost split his eardrums.
And damn close. Seeing it hit the rod and thunder coming moments later, alerted him. Too damn close.
Instinctively, he ducked his head to run, despite his training which advised against fast movement. A third bolt hit the rod. In the bright illumination, he thought he saw a pretty face, surrounded with madly swirling long red hair, silhouetted in an upstairs window. Then the image was gone, lost in the sudden darkness as the early evening became pitch black.
The heavens opened and the deluge began. He broke into a fast run but even so, only a few paces farther he was soaked to the bone. His clothes clung to him, water dripped from his hair. With a sigh of relief, he stepped into the hallway of his apartment complex. Only when he had stripped his wet clothes, dried off and put on warm sweats, did he think of it. What were the chances of lightning hitting that house, not once or twice, but three times, in seconds? Wow.
He thought about the face in the window. That had to be my imagination. No one lives there.
Just as quickly as it had arrived, the storm passed. The moon and the stars came out. Weird weather. His thoughts came to a screeching halt, when someone knocked. He suppressed a groan, when he opened it to see Jerry, standing on the threshold.
“Hey buddy. Storms over. Get ready. We’re going to the club.”
“Don’t you ever get tired of going there?”
Jerry cocked his head. “Are you kidding? With all those females promenading around? Not a chance.”
To his dismay, Jerry squeezed by and parked on the couch to wait.
“I just got home. Haven’t even eaten yet.”
“Then we’ll stop and get a burger.”
Damn, Jerry has a ready answer for every excuse I can muster.


Thanks for stopping by my friends.

Gary/G.E. Stills






Monday, February 20, 2012

The composition of a story

What method do you use in writing? Do you plan your story out before hand making detailed outlines and graphs before composing a single word? Do you jot down brief notes of a general nature? Do you write from the seat of your pants with only a general idea of the stories content in advance? No matter what method you use every story has three sections.

The composition of a story

Before anything is written you need an idea. This can come in the form of a dream, something you see, something that happens in your life or many other sources. Something has to inspire you and if you are the writer type you have the urge to put this occurrence or visual stimulation down in print. So what happens next?

There are so many different ways to proceed. Some writers outline their story making notes or graphs plotting out the major steps of their story. These notes and or graphs can be detailed or vague depending on the individual’s desires.

Some (like me) just begin writing down ideas and making notes. They plunge right in and begin writing the story. That is the beauty of modern computers. You can easily go back to a section and add in or delete things as they come to mind. This is so much easier than it was when I first began writing on a typewriter. Then you were forced to either use correct all (a lot in my case) or retype the entire page.

One of my stories was inspired by a model airplane I put together years ago. It hangs from the ceiling in my office. I was sitting in my chair staring off into space in search of an idea for a story. I happened to glance up and saw the plane. Eureka! Inspiration was born. Thoughts began flowing through my mind and I started putting them on the computer.

Whether you are the detailed outline type or the seat of the pants type writer, just remember, no one way is correct. It is up to the individual and usually comes down to whichever way is the most comfortable. No matter which method you use your story must begin at the beginning. It must have a middle and an end.

The Beginning.

In the beginning you introduce your main character or characters. I recommend that you restrict the number of characters to no more than three. You don’t want to overload your reader by introducing too many at once and possibly causing confusion. You can always add more characters as your story progresses.
Next you set the scene. Where the story takes place. The entire story can take place at a single location. For example in a single room. It can also encompass an entire world or several worlds if your story is science fiction. If your scene is large I would recommend you expand on it throughout the story.

In this section you set the conflict or situation that your character will face. Your first sentence and paragraph have to hook the reader and make him or her want to read more.

The middle.

This is usually the bulk of your story. Your character develops, you introduce additional characters. You may create other locations or scenes for your characters to visit. The conflict comes to forefront and the character faces it. The writer needs to pay special attention to this area to retain the reader’s interest. You can do this with plot twists, unexpected occurrences, action or any many other ways. Don’t let this section become boring or monotonous.

The ending

The conflict is usually overcome or solved by the characters at the end of the middle section or at the beginning of the ending section. The story outcome is reached. Loose ends are tied up. Unanswered questions are answered. If this story is part of a series then often the reader is given hints to encourage further reading. Most publishers want the story to have a HEA (Happily Ever After) or at least a HFN (Happy For Now) ending. The last sentence or the last paragraph is as important as the first.

Have a great day my friends and Write on

Gary